Oh gosh, I'm really sorry. I suppose I didn't read the application example at the top as well as I thought! Here's a third person sample for you, and sorry again!
Third Person: Opening his eyes, Yuma could feel the sun on his face as he sat up. A lawn chair? That’s weird, he remembered falling asleep in his hammock after saying goodnight to Astral. Wait! Astral would know something about where they are, or what to do. Looking down at his key, he pulled it up to eye level.
“Oi, Astral! There’s trouble!” He said, waiting for the spirit to appear in a flash of light, but nothing happened. Shaking the key, Yuma’s expression turned down into petulant frown. Still, nothing happened. What in the world…? Reaching down to check for his D-Gazer, he pulled it out to see if he could contact Kotori, his next option, only to find that everyone was out of his contact list. Quickly, Yuma stood up, looking around everything. Under the chair, around the yard…There was no sign of his house anywhere!
Oh no…Was he dreaming? Moving from foot to foot, he looked around before taking off in a random direction. He’d find someone he knew, he just had to look right?
“Nee-chan’s going to kill me if I don’t find out where the house went….”
ACCEPTED Congrats, your application has been accepted! Your character is now living at 1474 in Holly Heights, with a child slot. In order to get the ball rolling, here's what you need to do:
Comment back with the journal you'll be using for your character so that they can be accepted into the communities.
Create an IC Mailbox post on your characters journal that is not friends only. You are also free to treat this as an information holding post with your character's family and address listed if you wish.
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Third Person:
Opening his eyes, Yuma could feel the sun on his face as he sat up. A lawn chair? That’s weird, he remembered falling asleep in his hammock after saying goodnight to Astral. Wait! Astral would know something about where they are, or what to do. Looking down at his key, he pulled it up to eye level.
“Oi, Astral! There’s trouble!” He said, waiting for the spirit to appear in a flash of light, but nothing happened. Shaking the key, Yuma’s expression turned down into petulant frown. Still, nothing happened. What in the world…? Reaching down to check for his D-Gazer, he pulled it out to see if he could contact Kotori, his next option, only to find that everyone was out of his contact list. Quickly, Yuma stood up, looking around everything. Under the chair, around the yard…There was no sign of his house anywhere!
Oh no…Was he dreaming? Moving from foot to foot, he looked around before taking off in a random direction. He’d find someone he knew, he just had to look right?
“Nee-chan’s going to kill me if I don’t find out where the house went….”
Accepted
Congrats, your application has been accepted! Your character is now living at 1474 in Holly Heights, with a child slot. In order to get the ball rolling, here's what you need to do:
I hope you enjoy your stay here!
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