[As the view flickers on, a mighty finger pounds on the camera as a voice - its owner hidden from view - makes loud commentary.]
Does the light mean it's on or off? It's red... What does that mean??
[The finger moves away and Apollo's glowering face comes fully into view as he seems to be checking a number of things on the screen before him.]
...I think it means it's on. Is there an instruction manual for this thing?
[Once again, Apollo disappears from view as the sounds of draws opening and closing alert the viewer to the fact that Apollo is now searching for a manual that might not exist.
Finally, he sits up straight again, and pointedly fixes the camera with a direct look.]
Okay, okay, you can do this, Justice, just take a deep breath.
[He mutters the words to himself before following his own advice and taking a deep breath. His voice is loud again when he speaks once more.]
If this is on! Then someone should come help me! Because I don't know what I'm doing with this stupid computer!!
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Does the light mean it's on or off? It's red... What does that mean??
[The finger moves away and Apollo's glowering face comes fully into view as he seems to be checking a number of things on the screen before him.]
...I think it means it's on. Is there an instruction manual for this thing?
[Once again, Apollo disappears from view as the sounds of draws opening and closing alert the viewer to the fact that Apollo is now searching for a manual that might not exist.
Finally, he sits up straight again, and pointedly fixes the camera with a direct look.]
Okay, okay, you can do this, Justice, just take a deep breath.
[He mutters the words to himself before following his own advice and taking a deep breath. His voice is loud again when he speaks once more.]
If this is on! Then someone should come help me! Because I don't know what I'm doing with this stupid computer!!