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Your New Landlord ([personal profile] lessor) wrote 2015-10-07 04:09 am (UTC)

Revision Request

REVISION REQUEST;
Your app is looking great so far! However, there are some changes to be made before full acceptance can be given:
  • For the first person samples, these are a little too old to be considered a good judge of your playing as it stands currently. Please either provide a link to newer samples or write your first person sample.
  • For the third person sample, what has been provided is very one dimensional and only truly focuses on tennis. If possible, please provide a third person sample that offers a little more introspective range from this character.

  • Please reply with your changes within three days time. Thank you!

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